Problem With Story?

Yes, I do have a problem. My teacher, Mrs. Dohan says that my story can’t have to much high rated voilence in it. That is bad because the whole story was all about voilence. I will have to reason out with her about this, if she still says no . . . I will just start over.

Its no fair!!!!

Perview of Chapter One

Chapter One: Alone Again    

 

 As I woke up and went down stairs to get a bowl of ChocoPuffs I saw a note on the kitchen table. I took it as i was getting a bowl and a spoon. As I was pouring the cerial in the bowl, I read the note. . .

Dear Hattie,

Your father and I went to Atlantic City for a little celabration for your fathers promotion from a regular worker to an Advisor. We hope you will behave and remember, don’t eat the ChocoPuffs, there not what you think it is.

Love,

Mom

When I finished reading the letter I looked at the bowl. Looking at it real closely, I saw that it was Pellie’s rabbit food. With a spoiled breakfast, I went into the computer room and I went on YouTube. When I was watching a comedy video from Dane Cook, I saw an advertisement of a fighting tournany. Since I was a boxer and I was tought some street fighting, I printed out the form and filled it out and left it on the counter when my parents came home. It was about 7:30pm, so I decided to take a walk around the neiborhood. While I was walking I saw a gang, from the look at them, they wanted a fight, not just any fight though. . . There was three of them, one fat dude, one skinny dude, and one small dude that looked so pumped. I knew they were walking towards me, so I decided to get ready for a fight. As they were walking, I saw one of them take out a 5in. switchblade, another one  took out a silver eagle pistol. When we met face to face, I knew something bad was going to happen. . .

 

To Be Contiued. . .

Hello world!

Welcome to this website, known as Force Three. This website was created to help me with my story I have to write for my school. The story is called “Road to Fame”. It is supose to be done by the end of the school year so I wanted to get started so I have as much time as I can have. I will be posting the first chapter very soon. Please remember, we love your feedback!